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  M&M poem.
 Posted: 09/10/02 14:43
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Okay, this is my first attempt to try a M&M poem... I know, it's probably really... horrid :lol But hey, it's a rough draft, I just thought of it off the top of my head. Give me a break :lol :rollin

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Flashes of beautiful things, I see
Those I've seen, only in my dreams

Others that aren't so pleasant, though
Because of me, you've let them go

Seeing how much I mean to you
Knowing your love for me, is true

And as I look into your eyes
Your beautiful eyes
I try not to cry.


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  M&M poem.
 Posted: 09/11/02 03:28
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Awe, that was awesome! :clap :clap
:bow :bow :bow

My favorite lines were the very first two. :love :grin


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  M&M poem.
 Posted: 09/12/02 13:34
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Thanks! :)


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  M&M poem.
 Posted: 09/16/02 14:01
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Most welcome! :grin :grin


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  M&M poem.
 Posted: 09/16/02 16:33
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:cry :cry :cry

That was awesome.
I so need to find a creative bone in my body!


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