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Twisted Halls
The home is poor The ceiling is bent The floor is crooked But it is a home For within dwells burdens Burdens of a stressed mind Demons roam Not horned or scaled as many see But apparitions, free roaming Trapped within the house Causing havoc These are the burdens The rooms are large Filled to the brim and locked away The halls long as they are confusing Stretched to the end, but not yet The floor is checkered Jet black Slick and wet Blood red spattered o white The walls are twisted Crooked and bent Jagged and twisted Doorways uneven Bent outwards Slanting in Clawed Scratched Bloodied Each room off to a side Filled, filed, stored The burdens live only to stress Paintings of twisted faces Burnt and charred Melted and smeared Tortured and horrified Hang on the walls Staring, looking, screaming Murmurs can be heard Voices of the doomed but not yet dead They cannot penetrate the walls For they be shielded Shielded by a conscious mind Locked away Stranded Wandering Lost He is everywhere An overlord A god The master of the house Staggering down the hall Hope is his guide His heart shines with love The light at the end of the hall Bright, but dimmed by distance So close Soon, he tells himself. Soon. He continues on, not slowing
Always and Forever
I will love you Always and forever But the wall between us So close yet so far But nothing will stop us Nothing at all Even if you don't feel the same I don't think I can ever change The blood in my veins Forever yours My heart can't stop With you flowing through me Because I will love you Always and forever
Call To The Grave
Call, Call, Call to the grave Sweet, silent calls Die, Die, Die The harmonious calls Die, Die, Die The calling Constant calls Down to the grave Fires, Hell, Mummification Call the graves Calling, Calling, Calling Down to the grave
Delerious Love
The horror, the pain The randomness Of going insane Totally out of it
Nothing makes sense Through this dense Layer of fog It's like a bog
Down the rabbit hole I go Nothing left for me above Everything seems so slow Except for this heart racing love
The thoughts in my brain Are driving me insane Of a life without Your love, I'd kill myself, no doubt
You may not like it Nor do I But this tunnel is lit And so inviting, the flames up so high
But I will never go Without you saying so Because I don't want to make you sad And maybe a little mad
The tunnel seems stretched As I continue to walk On the walls it is etched Your breath taking love leaves me unable to talk
But I continue to go And not even slow As the memories of you I stole Cause tears to roll
The distance is too much My mind is tired and I can't help but yawn All these thoughts are heavy and such They keep me weighed down, but I must go on
I can't even scream These thoughts aren't what they seem I may be in a dazed state of mind But you'll never be left behind
Because the horror and pain The randomness Making me go insane But your love takes me out of it
Eternal Pain
The agony No running can save you Soon, eternal darkness Pain swiftly comes Gut wrenching, crippling pain Consuming all Hopelessness, failure, death You wish, nothing Again, nothing Somewhere worse than Hell Trapped forever
My Real Emotion
I am the tingling in the back of your neck Your arms Your legs The shiver When all heat leaves The fire burns out The evil eye you get from others Staring, staring, at you When you make a mistake Or do something stupid The feeling that lies in your gut When you know something horrible has happened The feeling you get from the red burning eyes Staring back out of the darkness of nowhere The feeling of being alone In the dark world around The crackling of fire burning all your possessions Your house All you own The feeling of being lost In a forest maze that never ends Hopeless running The rain pounding Making the maze more impossible Being lost forever In the maze of no return I am fear I am panic I am here to stay
It
Two sides of a one sided story Each side more different than the other Neither side proving any point Both can be seen through the one eye The one eye bigger than the others Swells with miniscule size Only to be burst by the smallest of atoms And found by the biggest of eyes And gone by It
Life And Death
Life and death Cancelled out Forever life No future lies ahead No past lies behind Time is stuck My choice Your decision Out time Their lives All on the edge of a blade A slippery blade We all will fail
Mr. Bob
Mr. Bob was a madman A mad man was he For he was not a sane man So a madman he must be
He wore his toast Ate his shoe He would never boast And he knew very few
It never occurred to him That some things were not edible So he said to Jim While drinking turpentine, This is incredible!
Jim said in a reply As if it were hilarious If you drink that you might die So Bob said Increblarious
Not know what he said Because his head was full of stupidity Yet he knew he wasn't dead The jar was empty
Darkness Halls
The shadows spread Splinter, Split, Shred Within the caves Caves of Darkness Halls Dwelling on each other Surviving off the weak The shadows spread Splinter, Split, Shred Within the caves Caves of Darkness Halls
Deadly Confusion
Why does seeing you Sad, Angry, Aggravated Make me so sad? The tears are nothing new Nothing old Just there These questions anger me Confuse me Depress me Slowly kill me My feelings mixed Not about you About us About others But me I confuse me more than ever
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shobhna guerin CRAZY CANDY
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Hey you. I haven't read all, but the first three ar epretty amazing! Damn, you are might depressing.. just my type! Great stuff! Thanks for writing!
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Ok...I am totally feeling very talentless! You are an amazing writer, JHTM!
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Tipsy
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Totally! Loved all of them!
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Well, as you already noticed, I think all your stuff is amazing!
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Hehe...I think alot of it's crap...but apparently people like it...O.o I have a couple songs I wrote that I'll post up... One of them I took Linkin Park songs, changed them around slightly and made my own hybrid song thingy from them...
Salvation Lost
I woke up in a dream today And I cannot take this anymore Forgot all about yesterday As I put my cold feet on the floor All these words they make no sense [Do I trust some and get fooled by phoniness?] My torture comes from my ignorance [Or do I trust nobody and live in loneliness]
Everything you say to me Reminds me you're still so distant, and I'm one step closer to the edge And I can't hold on, all the while I ask myself why All I wanna do is find a place to rest
Everything you say to me Reminds me you're still so distant, and I'm one step closer to the edge And I can't hold on, all the while I ask myself why All I wanna do is find a place to rest
If I take my life/I'll fall back And all my blood will stand still The fine line between this and that Is so faint it seems not to be real All I am now is but a memory I got trapped in the wake of deathly mistake/And my brain was too busy to react And because you're so close to me Your love may be distant But it's enough to bring me back
I try to give you the best of me [All I have] But my heart is all I give [All I have] I try to give you the best of me [All I have] But my heart is all I give [All I have]
Know, no matter how far we've come [Tomorrow seems so far away] Know, no matter how far we've come [Here I cannot stay] Know, no matter how far we've come [Tomorrow seems so far away] Know, no matter how far we've come [Here I cannot stay]
I'm so Sick of the tension/Sick of depression Sick of always being down, I'm Finding another place/For me to be All the while I'm struggling to live and not be alone
Everything you say to me Reminds me you're still so distant, and I'm one step closer to the edge And I can't hold on, all the while I ask myself why All I wanna do is find a place to rest
Everything you say to me Reminds me you're still so distant, and I'm one step closer to the edge And I can't hold on, all the while I ask myself why All I wanna do is find a place to rest
I try to give you the best of me [All I have] But my heart is all I give [All I have] I try to give you the best of me [All I have] But my heart is all I give [All I have]
If I Turn and run/I may never see you And to stay here/ Slowly kills me without you If I sit and wait while the world passes by Then they'll/Slowly break me and I'll more than cry If I snap and kill everyone around me This cursed society will shun me But if I don't act I won't find an answer Unless it grows to kill me like a cancer
I try to give you the best of me All I have But my hart is all I give All I have I try to give you the best of me All I have But my heart is all I give All I have [Break yourself] All I have [Break down and break] All I have [Break] All I have BREAK
Ever Insanity
The world around me quakes I fall into lies Inside, my body shakes, and Slowly dies Madness infests The demons run wild Each step is full of contests I feel like a child
Every step I take, every breath I steal Slowly, the blood of a dying man starts to congeal The scars I cannot hide For each one, more than a thousand tears have been cried Every wound I have made me a slave Infesting, molesting, and making me crave The love from you all, so sweet and so pure These wounds may heal, but I'm not sure If the love everyone gives me is the right cure It may wash away this sadness, wash away these lies, but also break me down to madness and hide away my pride
The years go slowly The days fly by I felt so lowly, but I tried to hold my head high I'll die at the stake Just to protect you all Behind, I'll leave in my wake The causes of all my falls
Every step I take, every breath I steal Slowly, the blood of a dying man starts to congeal The scars I cannot hide For each one, more than a thousand tears have been cried Each pain I got, I wanted more I'd poke, stab, and cut until I was sore The blood would always fall Each drop would amuse me, confuse me, and scream out like a call I knew it, I felt it, I was about to lose it all I could waste it all away, spend every last bit, but I could keep it and fake until I would break
Hour upon hour Day upon day The thoughts of evil overpower Whenever I'm away Body of blood Darkness in my soul Wish them away, I wish I could But compared to these thoughts, I have no control
Every step I take, every breath I steal Slowly, the blood of a dying man starts to congeal The scars I cannot hide For each one, more than a thousand tears have been cried
Every step I take [Step I take] Every breath I steal [Breath I steal] Slowly, the blood of a dying man starts to congeal [Congeal] [Every] Step I take [Step I take] Breath I steal [Breath I steal] Dying man's blood starts to congeal [Starts to congeal]
[Take]
[Steal]
[Starts to congeal]
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Wow, i liked how you used LP and then changed it. Very cool!
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The first one was LP, but the second one I came up with
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I have another song and a poem Friend In Need (Kill Me Now) Slit my wrists Break my neck I'll clench my fists My life's a wreck but before you do Let my last words be I love you too And I'm sorry My boy will fall My blood will run still I'll lose it all Before my thoughts will spill
Put the gun to my head, my fear is gone The thoughts have plagued me since my first dawn Kill me now kill me here And when the smoke will clear My soul is at rest I tried my best Let the sight stay with you, for it's a good deed Don't forget me, I'd do the same for you, a friend in need
Choke me slowly Crush in my skull I'm anything but holy My thoughts aren't clear, but a dull lull Kill me, I beg you I can't go on Each step further through the morning dew Step after step I'll be gone My blood doesn't want to be here My soul doesn't belong The end is so near I wish you to hurry it along
Put the knife to my throat, my fear is gone The thoughts have plagued me since my first dawn Kill me now kill me here Just don't let my tainted blood smear With one quick swipe I'll fall to my chest Give it all you've got, give me your best Let the sight stay with you, for it's a good deed Don't forget me as you ride away on your noble steed
Kill me now kill me here Thoughts of impurity have replaced my fear One fast swipe, one quick click My blood will congeal and turn thick Kill me now kill me here Release your body of all your fear Please do me this, for it's a good deed I, now, am a friend in need
And... Bleeding Me
Wet and thick Flowing in me Crimson relief Wanting to flee Bubbling and boiling Like a red sea A knife, a sword Both work as a key One quick swipe And it flows to be free
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Oh wow. That was harsh. So real .Very amazing! I cant wait to read what esle you have.
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I'm trying to write the perfect suicidal song...It's not going too great... Sure Friend In Need (Kill Me Now) is good and all, but it's like just approaching the hill of being what I want...It's like...teetering on the edge...not over...
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You keep trying, all right? You hav \e great talent and i know you can do it!
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You know what's awesome? One of my friends is gonna write music for that song with his guitar... Wahoo!
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Oh wow, that is awesome!
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lol...I need to get someone good to sing it too...lol I dunno if Steve can...and I dunno if I can too well...lol But still... Meh...I'll figure something out... Maybe I can find someone to do drums and bass for it too...lol Hell, while I'm at it...why don't I just help start a band? I mean...I could write the songs, Steve and Matt can play guitar and...Hmm...lol...there's still bass and drums...and maybe keyboard spots to fill...O.o lol Meh...too much work...
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Thanks for sharing..Awesome stuff
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I'm glad to share them and hear feed back...
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Great job... you certainly do have talent. maybe I'll be brave enough to post something soon.
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You write very well JTHM!
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